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The bug tamers are the mantis race (I forgot how they are called) that live with the arachne. They are introduced during the forest arc. It's stated that they traditionally tame bugs, and Vandar even asks about it, how come they are the only bug tamers. It's not too important in the grand scheme of things, actually, since the reason Vandar has the but tamer job is, well, questionable from the beginning, it affects weird things, and is later replaced with the "Abyssal" things, which actually does make sense. This was one of the things that threw me off a bit: Vandar equips an uninfested vampire just before or just after, I don't exactly rememeber, the Bellmod episode. And immediately after that episode he goes "Abyssal", as all vampires are abyssal, he can now equip them regardles of infestation. Wasn't it easier to make him go abyssal just before that and avoid the inconsistency? Well, then again he would be immune to the demon's eye ... which is never fired his way, actually.
I'm speaking nonsense again. Back to the point. I actually liked the main story a lot before he went to the duchy. It was well made, the author made an effort of being more or less consistent, and even tried playing with the rules he himself setup: since Hiroto doesn't have a fate or fortune, he is unaffected by them. He actually gets rid of his bad fortune in Origin (this is not explained in deep detail, but the narrative suggests it very strongly), so as Vandar in Lambda he is only affected by what he or someone else does with knowledge or belief of a result. In short: coincidences don't affect him. If you pay attention, this holds true during the initial arc, the ghouls arc and the rebuilding of Talosheim. I loved that part. But once he leaves for the duchy, he gets randomly delayed a couple of times, the characters doing the delay have no way of knowing what's about to happen. And the people doing the happening have no knowledge of Vandar at that point, at all. So due to these delays, he happens to arrive at a village the same day someone gets injured and he can heal them, the same day someone falls ill in a nearby village and he can travel to save them. And due to these fortunate delays, he arrives at the city the exact day that the Rainbow Blades do, and encounters them at the guild hall. What in the holy hell? Ok, let's assume he was not immune to coincidences, it just so happened he never encountered one up to that point. He is still supposed to be fortuneless, why does he arrive at the best possible time in various occasions, not just once? From that point on, the narrative becomes muddier and muddier, the inconsistencies pile up and at some point things just happen. It's half impossible to predict them, and the half that you can predics is that nothing will actually stand in Vandar's way ... Also, very dissappinted when he is revealed to be the Fated One, and not just a fortuneless random guy. A fortuneless random guy was a better MC than another fated one.
It's not that I'm just complaining to ruin the work. I'm ranting because it infuriates me how the author can just murder his work. To say the truth, anything not related to Vandar was very intresting: the history about Vida, Alda and the gods. The explanation of how the reincarnation systems work. The actual reason why the demons exist and what are they. The second war and how the situation came to be. And the subplot of the emperor and the S ranked guy. And obviously the Origin segments. Those felt great. But once Vandar comes into the picture ... it just feels dull.
I'm speaking nonsense again. Back to the point. I actually liked the main story a lot before he went to the duchy. It was well made, the author made an effort of being more or less consistent, and even tried playing with the rules he himself setup: since Hiroto doesn't have a fate or fortune, he is unaffected by them. He actually gets rid of his bad fortune in Origin (this is not explained in deep detail, but the narrative suggests it very strongly), so as Vandar in Lambda he is only affected by what he or someone else does with knowledge or belief of a result. In short: coincidences don't affect him. If you pay attention, this holds true during the initial arc, the ghouls arc and the rebuilding of Talosheim. I loved that part. But once he leaves for the duchy, he gets randomly delayed a couple of times, the characters doing the delay have no way of knowing what's about to happen. And the people doing the happening have no knowledge of Vandar at that point, at all. So due to these delays, he happens to arrive at a village the same day someone gets injured and he can heal them, the same day someone falls ill in a nearby village and he can travel to save them. And due to these fortunate delays, he arrives at the city the exact day that the Rainbow Blades do, and encounters them at the guild hall. What in the holy hell? Ok, let's assume he was not immune to coincidences, it just so happened he never encountered one up to that point. He is still supposed to be fortuneless, why does he arrive at the best possible time in various occasions, not just once? From that point on, the narrative becomes muddier and muddier, the inconsistencies pile up and at some point things just happen. It's half impossible to predict them, and the half that you can predics is that nothing will actually stand in Vandar's way ... Also, very dissappinted when he is revealed to be the Fated One, and not just a fortuneless random guy. A fortuneless random guy was a better MC than another fated one.
It's not that I'm just complaining to ruin the work. I'm ranting because it infuriates me how the author can just murder his work. To say the truth, anything not related to Vandar was very intresting: the history about Vida, Alda and the gods. The explanation of how the reincarnation systems work. The actual reason why the demons exist and what are they. The second war and how the situation came to be. And the subplot of the emperor and the S ranked guy. And obviously the Origin segments. Those felt great. But once Vandar comes into the picture ... it just feels dull.