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> Page 25
You mixed up text boxes - MC says replies with something like "Woah... Um, yeah." And the text you have goes into the box in the 2nd panel, and the one there - goes into the 3rd panel.
> Page 45
Kaera says "Yoshi-" (as in "Here I go..."), not "Yo, Kaera!"
> Page 46
Again mixed up text boxes - MC's line in the last panel is something like "I'm just kicking a ball with you guys.", the text you have in the last text box goes into the semi-last one, and the one in the semi-last - into the Kaera's text box.
> Page 79
I would say, considering the context, the second panel should be something like "But unfortunately... not into an extrovert."
One was an awakening to NTR. Well, that's not really important.
> Eats the food that was stuck in someones hair and then tells his friend he picked it up.