Yumemiru Danshi wa Genjitsushugisha - Vol. 3 Ch. 18

Joined
Aug 14, 2023
Messages
1
For a moment I was glad the series was being picked up by a different group. However, the translator:
1. Left bubbles without the text (page 12).
2. Misgendered Natsukawa… you know, the heroine from the story (page 13 is one example among others)
3. Made some parts really difficult to understand. Especially the dialog with the class president.
4. Clearly mistranslated grade rank with class rank. I doesn’t make any for Marika and Aika to be in the same “class ranking” is they are from different classes.

I truly wish the translator gets better with future translations but from this chapter alone I am not optimistic.
 
Group Leader
Joined
Jan 11, 2023
Messages
150
For a moment I was glad the series was being picked up by a different group. However, the translator:
1. Left bubbles without the text (page 12).
2. Misgendered Natsukawa… you know, the heroine from the story (page 13 is one example among others)
3. Made some parts really difficult to understand. Especially the dialog with the class president.
4. Clearly mistranslated grade rank with class rank. I doesn’t make any for Marika and Aika to be in the same “class ranking” is they are from different classes.

I truly wish the translator gets better with future translations but from this chapter alone I am not optimistic.
Thanks for the feedback.
Edit: I was looking for the "missing translated bubble" and it is nowhere to be found lol
Also, small edits made to the TL.
Edit 2: I hate black bubbles so much :fml:
 
Last edited:
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Jan 8, 2023
Messages
2,184
Man that's a rough read. Needs way more proofreading. Some parts just don't have context or make sense, some parts the genders are messed up, some parts they're talking to Sojou but calling him "him" instead of "you".
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Mar 8, 2023
Messages
296
Ya know, If you wanted to ramp up the drama, you wouldn't have "near misses" in terms of other girls going for MC, you'd have a clear rival to stoke the FMC's jealousy.. well.. I'm mean thats already happening with the dude just existing with other women on the planet, but I'd feel it would be more narratively sound than having FMC being a jealous psycho just because he talks to other people.
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Apr 6, 2023
Messages
4,292
Oh great, more simping from the MC


And his stupidity just builds up in the process, he literally just says shit without thinking


"Now you've confused me" it literally takes no effort to accomplish that.....this ch annoyed me, thank you MC
 
Dex-chan lover
Joined
Apr 6, 2023
Messages
4,292
He's given up on actually getting with her, it's the classic Japanese protag trope of "being her fan, treating her like an idol", rather than going for her romantically.
Honestly, that's a more pathetic look

We all know this girl ain't no idol or anyone with special talent, just your typical Japanese character simping over a normal girl
 

Users who are viewing this thread

Top