Like another commenter said, I feel very conflicted by how quickly everything wrapped up in this chapter. On one hand, William's tragic stage play is finally set in motion, as he's now addressed the world publicly as the Lord of Crime. On the other though, I would have loved to have spent more time following Whiteley and his younger brother and seen them interact in a more personal way instead of how by-the-book their relationship was presented in this arc. It might have helped to actually form an emotional bond with these characters and it would have made their demise a lot more shocking and upsetting.
I also hope the 'howdunit' of Milverton's machinations are shown in more detail soon. Having a villain show intricacy in their plans makes them a more considered and threatening antagonist.
Thank you for the tl, as always!