It's actually a nice scanlation. There is even no need to compare it to a certain other scan. I would do the same if I were in your shoes but alas, I have no patience to learn or do translations. So props to your quality of work.
Thanks for translating! Very good job for a first time.
The only thing I noticed was "apposed" was used on page 21, when it should be "opposed". A minor thing, maybe look into a proof reader down the line? Still, a great start - I hope you do more.
Hey all, thanks for the compliments. I'll be continuing to translate more chapters. @Dalek-Bob ty for pointing that out, I uploaded a revised page so it should be fixed now.
Good scanlation. Easy to read, I didn't notice any glaring grammar mistakes and there's actually some good resolution in the pages unlike the three pixel salad in the Rightdark scanlation.