Yuusha, Yamemasu - Vol. 1 Ch. 1 - My Next Workplace is Demon King's Castle

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This chapter just feels like mc jerking off infront of everyone, showing off his massive cock. He's just saying "If it wasn't for my armor, if it lasted 5 more minutes, etc., etc.". Honestly, half the pages feel wasted. It would be much better if instead of jerking him off with his victories, He could actually say his reason now, and spare a chapter.
 

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