Hazure Zokusei Tsuchi Mahou no Sei de Henkyou ni Tsuihousareta no de, Gangan Ryouchi Kaitakushimasu! - Vol. 2 Ch. 7 - Ch. 7: The Keeper of the Veins

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Odd place for a chapter to end, but it looks like the same length as the last one.
 
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page 5 misspelled high as hig
page 9 tough is spelled as "though"
page 12 our was spelled as your
page 18 valuable spelled as valuabe
Although, "your" and "though" are still existing words, so an automated spell checker might miss that. To preserve context and dialogue flow, this is where proofreading and editing by a human, who is actually proficient in the language, comes in.
 
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7 pages. I took only 7 pages to turn the hostile dwarfs into bffs. :facepalm:
 
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Sudden convenient problem to solve!

A cocoon like an eggshell with a viewing window? What's keeping the form?

And immediately into action.

So, as usual, dwarves drink a lot. Where do they get their drinks from? Alcohol require a significant farming community, and they're not trading. So magic?

So he's also OP in drinking. Why not.

That's not a cleavage you want to rest your face in. It's all metal.
 
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Drunk mc is my favorite he punished leader girl by puking on her very good let’s have more drunk mc

My hatred will burn till the end up time or until they explain why she’s such a massive bitch in the first chapters or show her getting better with the emphasis being they need to acknowledge she sucked at the start. But they won’t cause clearly character development isn’t the emphasis.
 

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