Ookami wa Tsuki ni Koi wo Suru - Vol. 1 Ch. 7

[MangaDex]

 

[Skater901]

You've got pages 14 and 15 around the wrong way. The double page where she grabs his hand.

Also I'm really confused how he "made it in time" despite it starting at 3 and him waking up naturally 3:15. Maybe he means he made it in time for his speech, because his was later than 3, but...

 

[pop_x3]

Gotta love the early confession.

 

[Proxpleb]

Holy shot this had me shook. Really thought they'd drag this thing like a certain meme we know

 

[Insev]

lmao he got confused

 

[Roriipupper]

hOLY SHIT

i did not expect a confession this early

 

[Kagimizu]

Foot?

Ooooooh no. He swallowed the whole damn leg.

 

[NishaAzalea]

NTR'd himself now he has to NTR himself back to win back the girl he lost to himself who stole her from himself

 

[Cubicle255]

Wow I got so invested I physically jumped in excitement in this development.... pseudo-selfcest NTR?

 

[ReadReadReadLOLOL]

Mans made a love triangle with only two people 😭

 

[themanthemyth]

holy this pacing was nutty

 

[Emago]

Holy shot this had me shook. Really thought they'd drag this thing like a certain meme we know

OOTL what's the meme tho?

 

[Proxpleb]

OOTL what's the meme tho?

That one meme that's really massive

 

[junkhouser]

Too many senpais per page are making me want to drop this already. When translating into English you gotta break that shit up, use you/she/he more often and only use Japanese honorifics when they are critical to the context/situation. Also every character’s voice sounds very similar. When translating you have to strive to give each character a distinct narrative voice. I’m sure that exists more or less in the Japanese (unless the writer is really bad), but it’s not coming through in the English. Overall I’m not very impressed with the English scripting. Great effort with typesetting and such though.