well the original version... ... welp... nvmMan. This could be a pretty good story if the author could stop rushing so much and flesh it out. It has a lot of potential.
the plot is pretty boring though imo, I can see why it's this rushedMan. This could be a pretty good story if the author could stop rushing so much and flesh it out. It has a lot of potential.
Eh, it's pretty common to take the long road to marriage and then the story often ends. I appreciate that it's doing something different.Man. This could be a pretty good story if the author could stop rushing so much and flesh it out. It has a lot of potential.
They both have a novelist grandpa? Uh oh...
You might be right and normally I would agree with you but MAYBE (big maybe), the author is afraid of making it seem like is another one of those age gaps where nothing happens for 50+ chapters, I looked at the original story and it....well "jumping the gun" would be taking it lightly, I think that the way she started working on the house to make him feel more confident, connecting with the family would have been fine enough without jumping to the marriage proposal, I hope he has a good editor that can steer him in the right direction because that original story didn't fill* me with confidence that he would be able to write a proper love story.Man. This could be a pretty good story if the author could stop rushing so much and flesh it out. It has a lot of potential.
Because there's still that lingering bit of H-logic propelling the story that's absent by design in shounen and often nerfed even in mainstream seinen. Add in the fact that most of these characters are working-age adults in an open countryside culture and it all falls into place. Think Itoko no Ko with a six -year fast-forward.How can an SFW adaptation of porn have more progress than any other romcom?!