Yarikonda Otome Game no Akuyaku Mob desu ga, Danzai wa Iya nanode Mattou ni Ikimasu - Ch. 14

[MangaDex]

 

[Reizor]

JAPAN!!!

 

[Rickachu]

Ah, the classic assassin maid trope still rings strong

 

[Kaarme]

I had hoped Ridd and the princess would meet already, but I suppose that would have been hasty. The author needed to show this sort of protocol since they are nobility. I'd suppose Ridd's old man is already meeting someone, though. It would be strange to keep an important guest waiting without as much as a greeting from the host.

 

[lesseffective]

I imagine page 12 was supposed to have something like "The Imperial Palace..." on it, but god it's so much better with him stating for a second time, in larger letters, how he misses Japanese food...

 

[Renan_Walheim]

You messed up the text in page 12, the one with the japanese castle.

 

[Alteraucous]

He's gonna make up his mind about the marriage after he tasted Japanese esque food once again.

He'll be all in to the world he left behind to back at it once again.

 

[NoctyrneSAGA]

I imagine page 12 was supposed to have something like "The Imperial Palace..." on it, but god it's so much better with him stating for a second time, in larger letters, how he misses Japanese food...

IIRC the raws said "A big castle!"

 

[Ironclad]

 

[PhycoKrusk]

Page 12: "I need to focus" in the last panel should be shifted upward by 15 pixels and to the left by 5. Black text should never overlap with a black object on the frame, otherwise it becomes impossible to read. This time there was enough of it visible for us to guess what it says, but watch for it happening again.

 

[PLaci1982]

I'm not happy with the TS...

On page 10:

THIS CULTURALM
IX [...]

Spoiler: Image reference.

This shouldn't be the 9th culturalm, but cultural mix.

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On page 12 the duplicate text from the previous page got at least 3 pixel wide outline, while the text I need to focus... got none.

Spoiler: Image references.

 

[PhycoKrusk]

I'm not happy with the TS...

On page 10:

Spoiler: Image reference.

This shouldn't be the 9th culturalm, but cultural mix.

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On page 12 the duplicate text from the previous page got at least 3 pixel wide outline, while the text I need to focus... got none.

Spoiler: Image references.

Now I can't decide if an outline would've been better, or shifting the position of the text....

 

[DarkMessiah247]

Is it just me or is the butler Zack giving off serious Walter C. Dornez vibes?