I imagine page 12 was supposed to have something like "The Imperial Palace..." on it, but god it's so much better with him stating for a second time, in larger letters, how he misses Japanese food...
THIS CULTURALM
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I need to focus... got none.
Now I can't decide if an outline would've been better, or shifting the position of the text....I'm not happy with the TS...
On page 10:
This shouldn't be the 9th culturalm, but cultural mix.![]()
On page 12 the duplicate text from the previous page got at least 3 pixel wide outline, while the textI need to focus...got none.
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Leave it as is because it will look like he loves japanese food so much that not only he said it twice in his own mind, he also can't focus on anything else at allNow I can't decide if an outline would've been better, or shifting the position of the text....