Kuina: Rise of the All-Girl Harem

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Trashy, but confidently so. My main criticism thus far is that the writing is very Utilitarian "this happened, then this happened" functional, but somewhat stilted.
 
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Trashy, but confidently so. My main criticism thus far is that the writing is very Utilitarian "this happened, then this happened" functional, but somewhat stilted.
It's only the beginning, i know it's not a perfect start but it will get better, it's based on a novel.
 

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