Watashi no Kokoro wa Oji-san de Aru - Ch. 27

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Looking at the responses here, I suppose I don't need to say that a lot of the sentences refer to the wrong subject. For example, Montana wasn't banned from his father's shop, but that kid was. This will confuse readers.

The comic also seems to want to skip over that flashback.

Thanks for trying with this release though. Does need a bit more time in the oven to verify the translations.
 
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It's been a little while so it's nice to see a chapter.

But yeah, the typesetting is pretty terrible. A bubble even had a 5 digit number before the text. And it seems to be something with many translations I see nowadays, but there's no check on the context, like who is actually the subject. It's a bit sad since I quite like this manga.
 
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Seeing as how there's a post number in one of the bubbles, the translation was probably taken from some -chan site.
There's even at least one that is just straight not translated at all, so really it looks like it want even from one site, but pages grabbed from all over.

No group is credited, and the user has exactly 1 upload: This.

If you're going to upload a book, fine, but put effort into it. The text changes size across pages and even within pages, so obviously you know how to do that. Change the size so it fits better into the speech bubbles, or fits at all. If it's still too big, reinterpret it so is shorter but carries the same meaning.

And please just make sure that you get tense and pronouns correct.
 

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