Watashi no Kokoro wa Oji-san de Aru - Ch. 37

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Thank u always for ur great work...
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His/her gross meter activated the selfdefense mechanism...
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Thanks for the translation. Enjoying Harukas interactions with everyone and East San i guess that guy is looking for him? Jobber Vampire.

Anyways, This was a nice comfy read while in a small cabin on Jeju while the winds and rains buffet the outside.

Nice and chill thanks Personalist X.
 
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I don't think there's a need to redo your old scans, unless there's some obvious problem (e.g. the raw was crap quality). You have enough work dealing with new chapters. Don't overwork yourself to death; you probably won't get isekai'd.
True. Not to mention JNC licensed the manga, so if anyone wants HQ versions of the chapters they can just purchase the official release
 
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Hey, that was a pretty good fight scene! Better than a lot of battle shonen fight scenes. The panelling was clear, they didn't overcomplicate things, they didn't slow time way down to drag the fight out, and they kept it humorous. His face splatting the barrier like a bird crashing into a sliding glass door? Hilarious! Casually telling him he's gross while he's trying to look scary? Fun character moment for Haruka!

My favorite detail- when she judo yeets him, first we see him hit the ground and see that his arm is missing. Then we see her holding the torn limb on the next page. This is great, because a toss happens so quickly, you wouldn't stop to react to the dismemberment until it's over. A lesser mangaka would jam in a panel to show the arm getting torn off and disrupt the depiction of time.
 
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The gem thingy is probably just him giving her a trophy made out of the arm she ripped off.
 
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girl keep it in your pants, my grandpa isnt gay

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well… she IS gay, just the other way around.

also I know it’s a long shot but there is a miniscule chance East is secretly both a woman (unlikely) and a vampire (likely) and ends up a possible romantic interest for Haruka. That or East ends up overcome by bloodlust and ends up being tragically killed by Haruka.
 
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Those last two panels with him staring at the crowd and then showing Haruka's group did give me the same feeling, potentially implying his shock at the fact that there's another dark elf here.
Nah he doesn’t have the ears
 
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Huh. i get the feeling that Haruka didn't know he could defend himself against the vampire until the vampire grossed him out enough that he yeeted it out of instinct.

As was already mentioned, Haruka really needs to have a sparring session with someone he can't kill by accident and learn what he can actually do.
 
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Hey, that was a pretty good fight scene! Better than a lot of battle shonen fight scenes. The panelling was clear, they didn't overcomplicate things, they didn't slow time way down to drag the fight out, and they kept it humorous. His face splatting the barrier like a bird crashing into a sliding glass door? Hilarious! Casually telling him he's gross while he's trying to look scary? Fun character moment for Haruka!

My favorite detail- when she judo yeets him, first we see him hit the ground and see that his arm is missing. Then we see her holding the torn limb on the next page. This is great, because a toss happens so quickly, you wouldn't stop to react to the dismemberment until it's over. A lesser mangaka would jam in a panel to show the arm getting torn off and disrupt the depiction of time.
I didn't notice the missing arm, just saw all the signs of impact and his broken legs when he finally came to a stop.
 
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guy in last panel jumpscared me, while reading WN I thought they were like big and burly for some reason

Someone here praised the fight scene and I couldn't agree more, it's super tight, well paced and manages to do everything right, you know?
Great work PersonalistX! About your questions: while I won't deny that it could be great to see the earlier chapters up to current standards, I fear that doing so will burden you too much, and no one wants that to happen, we want you happy and not exausted <3 So how things are atm is okay
 
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@PersonalistX thank you for the scanlation. I have a few suggestions on your translation:
"He grow a wing." Awkward grammar here. He grew two wings; plural. It would be better as "He grew wings." Or "He sprouted wings."

"F-for today...!" "D-don't think-!" "I'll let you off this once!"
The vampire then flees. Fleeing is letting them off. So the "D-don't" part contradicts that. He's doing the opposite of what he says. Even as a bluff, it's contradictory. It would make more sense if in the 2nd text box, he instead said "I-I think-!"

"I have a question for today actually, would you want me to rescanlate all of my old chapter that doesn't really up to my today quality?"
This would be better phrased like this:
"I have a question for you all today. Should I rescanlate all of my old chapters that aren't up to my current level of quality?"

You have gotten better translating over time; but you still have some room for improvement. I would rather see you focus on improving your grammar, phrasing, keeping track of who is talking, singular vs plural usage, making sentences sound more natural and flow smoother; rather than go back and redo old chapters.
 
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@PersonalistX thank you for the scanlation. I have a few suggestions on your translation:
"He grow a wing." Awkward grammar here. He grew two wings; plural. It would be better as "He grew wings." Or "He sprouted wings."

"F-for today...!" "D-don't think-!" "I'll let you off this once!"
The vampire then flees. Fleeing is letting them off. So the "D-don't" part contradicts that. He's doing the opposite of what he says. Even as a bluff, it's contradictory. It would make more sense if in the 2nd text box, he instead said "I-I think-!"

"I have a question for today actually, would you want me to rescanlate all of my old chapter that doesn't really up to my today quality?"
This would be better phrased like this:
"I have a question for you all today. Should I rescanlate all of my old chapters that aren't up to my current level of quality?"

You have gotten better translating over time; but you still have some room for improvement. I would rather see you focus on improving your grammar, phrasing, keeping track of who is talking, singular vs plural usage, making sentences sound more natural and flow smoother; rather than go back and redo old chapters.
"Don't think" is saying "don't think you won", so it fits.

Plus, end notes aren't part of the manga, the guy didn't put effort into it, so I think they know the grammar and phrasing are off. It just doesn't matter.
 

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