IT'S BACK
Unfortunately the translation is quite unnatural and hard to read in places.
E.g. just on page 8, the first panel: "Up until this place became like this, including myself. There were three people left." and the fifth panel: "Well, it is a pity since you are young. But let us get along from now on."
Or on page 14, the text in the boxes have all been translated as separate sentences "The death-stained snake, which had grown up eating only "fear" until now. Even if it was only five people for now. It manifested by receiving their faith." would be much smoother written as a single sentence.
Right now it all just reads like MTL and it puts the burden on the reader to figure out what the hell the text is on about.