I really wish there was no HAREM! And frankly this feels LESSER then another series somewhat similar to this one "Jinsei Gyakuten - Uwaki Sare Enzai wo Kiserareta Ore ga, Gakuen Ichi no Bishoujo ni Natsukareru" which also went abit overboard in the LATTER part of the story! I like that one because the protagonist DIDN'T have a Harem like in this one! Really wish the Girls remained having a crush on him and wanting to help him and only the "Girl I mentioned from his past" is the Heroine he gets with! No Harem!
And another thing is I really feel the Karma for the Three Stooges is abit extreme! Hate em, but I would have prefered if the old Company MC was with was semi-competent and it was just his old Editor who was incompetent and made life MISERABLE! Like the other editors were good, and with her, she was one of THOSE type of losers! The Girl who wanted to PROVE she was as good as the guys, but then ONE "Fuxkboi she should have distrusted, but didn't" later and she becomes a stupid woman ruled by her groin that once SMART decisions she made, are now made DUMB because of "following it" At least it would make her downfall more well deserved, she didn't get tricked, and as said, if her backstory was that she never had a man before, that would make her even MORE pathetic, she got far so well, just to RISK IT ALL on some fuxkboi who has proven on the spot that he isn't a serious worker, but she let one dicking convince her to risk HER OWN HARD WORK for him.....and it blows up in her face because turns out the MC was "the guy who knew the codes" and turns out putting someone who thinks with his dick that she KNEW thinks with his dick in charge of a "FEMALE" author under them was prehaps the DUMBEST idea (not that she didn't thinks so, since she idiotically assumed he LOVED HER and DIDN'T fuck her for the sake of having a SUPERIOR under his thrall because again "background of a girl who never thought about sex till she took an idiotic chance with someone who is an EMPLOYEE which should have been an ALERT for someone like her who focused on a career, but she let her groin talk for her
As for Ex, it's hard to see MC as he is and yet he DIDN'T see her for how horrid she is! Would have been better to show that she DID have "good moments" that lulled him into ignoring her FLAWS till Marriage brought them up because he worked alot and she said NOTHING or little that he didn't KNOW what she wanted since she expected him to MIND READ HER LAZY ASS!
I mean Jinsei did it Better with Miyuki, who was MADE in mind to be a NTR Heroine in that she was the LEAST LIKELY to get stolen, yet still she was because she had a lapse in judgement that WAS THERE in her life, but was well hidden from even her STBX that she never realized it till she did the stupid thing that wrecked her life and only AFTER it wrecks her life and relationships just to learn it REALLY WASN'T WORTH IT IN THE END! At least BEFORE the reveal in CH 1, she didn't seem the type to cheat and her relationship was PERFECT! Till after Ch 1 where like the MC of the story Eiji Aono mother, you start to wonder WHAT he ever saw in her! For a Smart Girl, she was SUPER STUPID (in a way, this is what I was conveying with the Editor, someone who LOOKED like she'd NOT fall for an OBVIOUS fuxkboi like the Junior.....yet she did and wrecked her career she wasted much of her youth and such pursuing FOR NOTHING.
No need to make Ex here like Miyuki, but at least make her make more SENSE on why MC was foolish enough to think she was WIFE MATERIAL and then have him lose MORE RESPECT for her as now that the MASK fell off and he thanks to the girls got his self respect back, "starts to question WHAT he saw in her to date her, much less MARRY HER!" (With the other girl from his past, getting with her would have SOME regret on his end as it would her as with her she SAW his ex for how crappy she was, but never told him because she loved him and wanted to respect his decision, and regrets it after how he admits how crappy things got leading to her cheating and divorcing him! He DID see the flaws in her, but clung to her SMALL POSITIVES that did NOT excuse the negatives that YES it is his fault, but make it "man in love mixed with Sunk Cost Fallacy" that was BROKEN both from catching her cheating, being BLAMED for the cheating by her, and the divorce! Which lucky for him, she wanted out QUICKLY to run to her "lover" that she didn't take anything MAJOR from him, wanting to FORGET MC as fast as possible....which she regrets later once it was clear his Fuxkboi Junior only BED HER as a FLEX towards MC, once that was done, he had NO INTEREST IN EVER MAKING HER HIS WOMAN! Basically she treated a cheating one night stand like it meant anything more like a loser! Hence screwing herself, ESPECIALLY as her family DISOWNED HER once they found out the REASON of the Divorce. Yet she doesn't learn her lesson
And someone else said it best, the Drug angle makes the two women into VICTIMS abit since they were drugged unknowingly. I would have just gone with him getting expensive ass drugs for HIMSELF. It makes THEM look more foolish for letting sex ruin themselves, makes him a BIGGER LOSER for assuming he was bigger then he was when it was the drugs, AND can add a side effect, namely he would have to KEEP using the drugs and it would EFFECT his manhood negatively AND cause him to become impotent and a PE if you 'know what that means" but still keep a sex drive! And he was made aware of it, he just didn't Care assuming he'd sex his way to the top and could always get more, only his firing ruined that and he FORGOT till it became relevant again. Just as he FORGOT that stealing his seniors accomplishments and then getting him fired unjust was ALSO idiocy on his end, but again, with the drug thing, he lied so much that even HE started believing his own damn lies! Screwing himself over later
And I would like MC to at least ACKNOWLEDGE his own fault in many of his own misfortunes, YES Fuxkboi and his duo idiot bimbos had a hand in it, but they only DID cause he made it that much easier for them to do so! His getting better is a mix of the girls helping him AND him acknowledging what he did wrong, like the new workplace and realizing HE made life hard for himself at his old place because of his own flaws, but now FREE of them now that he knows better, he isn't making excuses anymore for himself, OR those who wronged him. His "beatdowns" on each of them, like this chapter to his EX Superior is the best cause it's HIM calling them out on the obvious! Like with the Editor, that line cutting her off from excuses, as she did to him was good in my opinion! She didn't think much of him as she was also thinking with her groin, and now that it blew up in her face, coming to him, disrupting his life when after firing him, she had ZERO RIGHT TO CONTACT HIM AGAIN to beg him to "come back" with it OBVIOUSLY because it's meant for HER advantage then it is his! He can only shake his head, especially if he KNEW she once WAS respectable till she stupidly risked it all gambling on the fuxkboi! Best part would be the Drug thing I mentioned, they did have sex WITHOUT THE DRUG INVOLVED and she got to realize he was NOTHING like she remembered he was, and finally paid attention, bonus if the box for the drug with instructions was in his stuff and she finds it, becomign MORE ENRANGED since it means that "god like sex" she risked her career and self-respect over was "dope induced" and he was average in everway! He just realized too late that he didn't have more and assumed he HAD HER already so it wouldn't be any different...whcih o[ course he WASN'T and it WAS noticed, I mean the Enrage comes AFTER confusion on her end with how unimpressive he was!
Actually don't make the drugs expensive, make them experimental and he was given a certain amount of them and a warning, which he didn't listen to and it got him his HAREM, but by the time he realized his FOLLY in over using them, the company that gave him it fell under and the side effects get to him, ESPECIALLY as said, if he HAD followed instructions properly, he would have HAD A CHANCE of not fucking himself over with the side effects, but cause he didn't. Well you know already what I said! It would be a Fitting, he brought it on himself WITHOUT leaving room for the two bimbos having ANY REASON FOR ANYONE TO FEEL SORRY FOR THEM! As I hate how some are FALLING for their "I'm sorry" when it's obvious if the consequences never hit, they would NEVER be sorry for what they did to MC! And I wonder if the pity for them remain when they choose to DISRUPT MC life anyway because they can't take "NO LEAVE ME ALONE" as a valid answer! /SPOILER]
Sorry in advance if the Spoiler section was a HUGE WALL! I just felt CREATIVE when typing it
