Also I changed page 15 from "move to the rear" to "swing the gun to the rear." I knew the mtl didn't make sense but I was editing late at night and my brain wasn't braining.
I was thinking about it but I decided to go with US tank comms. From what I looked up the tank commander says "target" for a hit. I should probably go back and put in a TL note but I'll do it in the morning.
Exactly this. The more I think about this the more I find Dale to be an insert for the white knight incel that has to "protect" the lady. Especially when the supposed premise of the story is how does the banishing party grow from their mistakes but it's just taken over by Dale going from lazy...
It kinda hurts that Chako understands Reiji and that he'll never be able to leave that town but is bittersweet about finally seeing him find a purpose. She knows that's probably going to be the last time she sees him. Now he finally got some resolution with Chako and Gen.
Like others have been...
They're probably 27-28ish and are doing a HS or college reunion. Afaik it's the trope to over estimate their age and if they're close to the decade mark they're treated as being that decade.
I also was curious so I went back and it looks like she's drinking iced tea. At the very least it's in...
Yea this is bad but it certainly isn't the 4th worst thing I've read. It's generic, tropey, and follows a set episode structure but that's about it. It's not outright offensive to the eyes.
Nah it's just more gaslighting by the author going "see Dale's a good guy, he's apologizing for the misunderstanding! (that he's blaming Est for)" It's so completely obvious that it's written to blame Est to make him accept responsibility and to keep Athena in the dark thinking that Est hates...