Kuni ni Saikyou no Barrier wo Hattara Heiwa ni Narisugite Tsuihousaremashita ~Ore no Mahou ga Yabasugite, Bijo to Mazoku ni Kakomarerun da ga!?~ - Ch…

[NightHalocraft]

This is one of those situations where they condense too much. Usually, it's relatively okay if it flows well, but this is just a jumble mess.

 

[GreC_89]

Mundane Mann spoted!

Did i miss something? Or did i forget these characters

When the story prefaces that they're looking for strong fighters and suddenly a handsome K-pop singer looking guy with too complex a design for a throwaway character comes up, you better bet your money that he's going to be OP. I mean that's just common sense.

Wait what

Just Cid got bored and decided to mess up in another manga.

Oliver be like: "Secret Technique, Plot Armor Slash!"

Still weaker than a sneeze

 

[Jakeh24]

I decided to reread from chapter 1, word by words, panel by panels, page by pages, chapter by chapters....
.
BUT GODDAMN, THIS IS TOTAL WRECK, Did I miss chapter xx.2 chapter xx.3 something??
What the heck Happening? Who is this girl?, where is previous girls?, where are we?, when they get killed? How was that happened?
.
This manga total failed to explain 5 Basic W and 1 H

• What: What is happening or what is the event?
• Who: Who is involved in the event or story?
• Where: Where did the event or story take place?
• When: When did the event or story occur?
• Why: Why did the event or story happen?
• How: How did the event or story happen, or how was it done?

It still be fine when chapter 4, but now I totally clueless at chapter 10,

Legit this^^

Also the powerscaling in this manga fucking sucks

 

[Nivek]

I decided to reread from chapter 1, word by words, panel by panels, page by pages, chapter by chapters....
.
BUT GODDAMN, THIS IS TOTAL WRECK, Did I miss chapter xx.2 chapter xx.3 something??
What the heck Happening? Who is this girl?, where is previous girls?, where are we?, when they get killed? How was that happened?
.
This manga total failed to explain 5 Basic W and 1 H

• What: What is happening or what is the event?
• Who: Who is involved in the event or story?
• Where: Where did the event or story take place?
• When: When did the event or story occur?
• Why: Why did the event or story happen?
• How: How did the event or story happen, or how was it done?

It still be fine when chapter 4, but now I totally clueless at chapter 10,

All is simple, the guy got vanquished but rather a party, his nation and now the story is freestyling those tropes

 

[Thunderator]

Jesus this series is so trash, and not the good trash you just turn down your brain and enjoy, this one is just BAD

 

[unnamederror]

Jesus this series is so trash, and not the good trash you just turn down your brain and enjoy, this one is just BAD

lmao, agreed, even a 2 years old kid would make a better story than this