Only saw 1 page, but just came by to say thanks.
Pg.3: "It would be good to have Rera listen" - was Rera going to listen or was Col. Aimer?
Pg.10: "If I'm too close to my allies, I'll get in the line of fire" - was he going to get in the line or were her allies?
Pg.11: "If you place your artillery..." - place or aim?
Pg.12: "Lt.Roz, because of her injury" - her or his?