Musket Girls! ~Tensei Sanbou to Senretsu Otome-tachi~ - Ch. 15

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Only saw 1 page, but just came by to say thanks.

Pg.3: "It would be good to have Rera listen" - was Rera going to listen or was Col. Aimer?
Pg.10: "If I'm too close to my allies, I'll get in the line of fire" - was he going to get in the line or were her allies?
Pg.11: "If you place your artillery..." - place or aim?
Pg.12: "Lt.Roz, because of her injury" - her or his?
 
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Thanks for the chapter. If I looked closer maybe I could see some issues with your work, but nothing is standing out to me so it’s definitely better than a lot of the slapdash work by larger groups I see.
 
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Thanks for the chapter :salute:
I really do enjoy this series. I wish it got more love.
 
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Thank you for picking this up to translate Bearserker Scans!

Oh god, it's the dense protag stereotype... here's hoping it doesn't go to far in his denseness. And the "lead heroine" shorty need to up her game. The only time I ever rooted for a main heroine as short as her was Mina from Vampire Bund... that one rizzed as easy as breathing. So far, I'm for Hannah and Duchess Ritreille.
 
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Thanks for giving this a bump. It's a good first attempt, but it could use a bit more polish.

There's a lot of instances of things being just slightly off like on page 2 "The hallway ahead leads to brigade commander's office" instead of "The hallway ahead leas to THE brigade commander's office" or page 3's "You probably lurking around that man" instead of "You WERE probably lurking around that man" that makes the whole thing feel a little janky.
 

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