Suterareta Daiyon Oujo wa Bokoku ni wa Modoranai - Ch. 1

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Good job on the translation! 👏 If no one wants to pick it up I would be cool to see at least a few more chapters. Thank you OP!
 
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I'm so confused about this story.

First and foremost: The Happy Pal Kingdom? Really? :kek:
Was she sick constantly or just occasionally and her family overreacted? They treat her as if it was a constant thing, yet on her better days she was able to outrun a pack of wolves at night in a forest without breaking down due to a lack of muscle (adrenalin can only get you so far when you spend every day in bed) or having a coughing fit.
Did her illness go away due to changing countries or were her new Happy Pals (I couldn't resist) just more tolerant?
Did her original family not think about the ominous (and rather idiotic) prophecy at all when abandoning her in the woods (instead of personally ensuring her death)?
 
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The edited MTL is fine, its good enough to understand than some random MTL for paid content.

It will be good to keep doing it like this, doubt any group will pick this title. :nyoron:
 
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A couple of things confused me and when I checked it's because the machine botched it.
The "Happy Pal" name is more like "Hapipal" or "Hapipar", a single word.
When the kid says "small" it's a (somewhat) rude word; I don't know what could've been better but you should read it like "small fry", "kiddo" or something like that. Ask your closest native speaker.
When the girl is adopted, her name changes but in a very stupid way: her original name is "ミーリル", her new name is "ミリル". It's basically like the pronounce of "these" vs "this".

I don't know who Kirk is, is it a Star Trek reference?
 
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A couple of things confused me and when I checked it's because the machine botched it.
The "Happy Pal" name is more like "Hapipal" or "Hapipar", a single word.
When the kid says "small" it's a (somewhat) rude word; I don't know what could've been better but you should read it like "small fry", "kiddo" or something like that. Ask your closest native speaker.
When the girl is adopted, her name changes but in a very stupid way: her original name is "ミーリル", her new name is "ミリル". It's basically like the pronounce of "these" vs "this".

I don't know who Kirk is, is it a Star Trek reference?
Thanks, I was confused as he'll about her "new" name being the exact same
 
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The new family admits her appearance is super obvious and distinctive, and they even already have a newspaper with her photo of her death. How do they plan to hide the fact shes the person everyone sees in the photo? Honestly, announcing openly that you're adopting the abandoned princess would likely be better, since isn't everyone going to claim you kidnapped her eventually?
 
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The new family admits her appearance is super obvious and distinctive, and they even already have a newspaper with her photo of her death. How do they plan to hide the fact shes the person everyone sees in the photo? Honestly, announcing openly that you're adopting the abandoned princess would likely be better, since isn't everyone going to claim you kidnapped her eventually?
Already declared dead by the king and the whole continent know she is death a decade ago.

Of course no one will realize who she is or make a fuss of who she was. /s
 
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Hmm, a littel tropey, abandoned in another country/dukedom trope etc is quite popular at moment, but still seems interesting enough, art is okay, tl is okay, but... 8 years? Thats hell of a time skip, probably gonna use some flashbacks to deus ex machina some things or for filler. Decent enough start, gonna continue for the time being. Thx for tl. :D 🙏
 
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The promise of the story was slightly interesting.
Fourth princess constantly sick, bringing either good fortune or not.

The delivery was as if it's a kid's work. Rushing through the checkpoints instead of building it up probably because he doesn't have hope for too many chapters before getting forced to finish the story?

Just as well the story could've started already in the forest or maybe even in their house and the whole thing, the family "checking up on her", her dad leaving her alone, the wolves howling in the dark forest could have been just a flashback and it would serve as a small excuse for the rushness of it.

And it looks like the sickness turned out to be some sort of probably allergy, probably pollen I guess? With how it quickly disappeared.
 
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genuinely confused about the set-up... the royal family of a country has to be frugal because of a royal family members illness?? like, do you not collect plenty of taxes for stuff and have royal doctors literaly on retainer for these situations?

but more than that... waiting until she is somewhat healthy to abandon her? why not just dump the sick child out there and save the wait and money needed to see her health improve only to through it all away when you abandon her without ACTUALLY confirming she has... yknow... died?
 

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