Nezumi no Hatsukoi - Ch. 117

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What the author is doing here is technically lampshading. They're having the doctor spell out just how wrecked her body is, basically waving a flag and saying, "Yeah, we know this is insane, just roll with it." But honestly, it feels less like a clever wink and more like CYA writing. The author wants the cool factor of a superhuman assassin shrugging off lethal injuries like they're nothing, while also wanting the fake credibility of a medical scene that pretends to care about realism.

You can't really have both. Either she's superhuman, or she's not. Don't give me a whole doctor monologue and expect me to go, "Oh, okay, that makes total sense now." It doesn't. It doesn't actually fix the problem, it just draws a giant arrow pointing at it and hopes we won't notice. It feels... disingenuous.

Thanks for the chapter!
 
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well now we need to know what Ao is really planning, my guess he did wanted to kill her and all the group in some way or another, but he did fall for Nezumi, he better make a move fast, because seems Nezumi is gonna get brainwashed again and most likely forget about him so she does not has to suffer anymore
 

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