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On page 4, it should be "rationality", not "ration".

Now that? That right there at the end? That is a flag.

@xxsaznpride it's a recommendation pertaining to sentence structure and grammar. What the fuck should I cite, a Wikipedia article about sentence structure?

@Wiggle_Sauce @GoldenGummy in the menu on the left side of MangaDex (you have to open it on mobile, not sure about PC) there's a "follows" tab. This tab shows every single chapter update for manga you follow, and is the best way to track chapter releases for said manga.

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On page 4 it should be "for those two as well, after all"

So desperately in need of proofreaders that you're calling yourselves "Rose Quarts" in the end card... Oof. I'd volunteer but I've already got my plate full. Good luck finding someone!

You may want to consider asking someone to proofread for you.

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Man this story is a shitshow. Fun premise but everything else is a disaster. What a shame.

If you don't have a proofreader, I'd be glad to volunteer.

@SquigglesJP I'll cross out errors and put in the correct replacements. Additions (missing letters/words) will be in italics. In order: "Even I had to sacrificed sacrifice my child." "It's been taught to us by our family families for generations" ("Family" could be correct (and it is...

Oh my god yes

Did your proofreader die? This chapter's so messy I honestly wondered if it was a snipe and I hadn't noticed. I can point them out if you want, but I would think you'd have a proofreader to do that.

@MeiraEve they did foreshadow this, but it's still not exactly the best twist. I, for one, am gonna drop it here. Cute girl and dragons are not enough to cover up the writing.

Ugh I really hope Leon isn't just generic easily manipulated boi

Cuuuuuuuuute

Chris was the head magician. This other guy wasn't. If Chris lost to him in spite of that, it would be a huge joke. How could Chris be so incompetent as to fail to notice a magic trap when magic is his speciality? I don't buy it. Either poor writing or a fake-out.

"Fight scenes are not what this series is about so there is no reason for them to spend a large amount of effort on it." I'm glad you missed my point entirely. Fight scenes are not what Maid Dragon is about either and they still fit in a few extremely well-done action scenes. They're good in...

@Equilibrium which one? The old man being a good guy? I called that 3 chapters ago. I think I commented about it either last chapter or the one before that if you want to verify this.