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lol, and this scanlator has the gall to ask for money to speed up their releases?

This version's missing a page after page 12.

I just read the two side-by-side, and I'd agree with you. A little bit of weirdness here and there like "puricure" instead of "purikura", but much less of that "a non-English speaker translated this" vibe than the Foxachu/Inari version.

My dude, if you can't tell what's wrong with sentence structures like "Don't you have unfinished business in this country, left?" (page 7), you need to brush up on your English.

The first panel on page 8 should say Miel, not Miltie. I think a similar mistake happened in a previous Miel chapter, but I can't remember where offhand.

Lord knows I'm not, though. My eyes and my brain hurt after trying to read this.

So, how long until the TL learns that the term is "machine translated", not "machined translated"?

I am joining the chorus of people asking you to please take some more time to proofread - both for basic spelling errors and bad grammar. Preferably by someone who's actually fluent in English.

psst it's spelled "ciao"

Yeah, the TL definitely feels better this chapter. Keep up the good work!

Given what happened in the chapter, the title should be "... and Nadeshiko's older sister", not "... and older sister Nadeshiko"

It'd be one thing if you were translating from the original Japanese (which has its own issues since a direct word-for-word JP>EN translation often leads to incredibly funky English), but if you're translating the Spanish TL into English, "staying true to the original" has already gone out the...

Yeah, that page (17) isn't translated correctly. It doesn't make sense as written, given that it's girlified Dad doing the punching.

An admirable effort for a rush job, but next time you'll want to run your translation past a proofreader. There were many instances where the English barely made sense.

Thanks for putting in the effort, but I will note that these translations could use proofreading by an English speaker. While it's largely comprehensible, there are word choices and sentence structures that don't read like fluent English.

Soooo many. This translator sorely needs a proofreader.

Why on earth would you translate that line in that busted-ass way?

That really doesn't make sense in context. You should have someone double-check the translation there, as well as lines that don't make grammatical sense like "By the way Christmas" and typos like "your" when you meant "you're."

Ah, I see the scanlator also had some power troubles during the fires. And the wind/rain storms. And the heat waves.

Truly incredible translation work.