The clean up and translations were on point! Thank you!
I wasn't distracted by anything at all when reading. I read on mobile, so I didn't encounter the page sizing issue that others have on desktop.
For the people trying to justify D&A's actions with spoiling readers, yes you can know that it's going to happen in the story eventually and still have the scene be spoiled. It was wrong and petty of them to spoil the scene like that.