@JenaraYT I know you're translating from spanish to english, I can read both. You need to work more on your grammar, some sentences are akward to read. The only thing I can recommend you right now is to consume a lot (and I really mean a lot) of english media (especially text for grammar) to enrich your vocabulary and detect translation errors.
I have also translated from spanish to english before, it is complicated haha. Buena suerte, todos los que hablan inglés te agradecerán mucho, no tengas miedo.