Thank you, you are beautiful. I've read the novel so I know the story from start to finish. Still I like seeing the drawing and how the artist has the story go and what they skip.
Everything except the grammar was great but the grammar was actually terrible. Like it was so bad that I could barely understand what they were talking about. Regardless, I still appreciate the fact there was an update since a certain group stopped.
P.S.: I don't understand people complaining about grammar. I'm glad there's an english translation at all, and I don't think it's bad at first try.
I've read a lot worse. The editing is also well done. 😉