ummmm didn't I read this exact chapter before? I could have sworn the translator removed it, I don't remember who it was but they removed it due to negative comments they got.
The structure of most of the text was good. There were grammatical errors here and there, but that can be easily fixed by getting someone to go over the text for you.
Other than that. Thanks for putting in work.
I know number of folk down here are being overly rash and critical, but I made sure to go over the chapter couple of times and I will say that it is 5 times better than any stupid machine translation.
There was a clear effort made to make things comprehensible and understandable to read. There was flow and besides grammatical errors being in the higher parts, the sentence structure remained quite solid for most of the bubbles.