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having looked over the chapter again more critically and comparing it to the raws, you ought to stop redrawing except where strictly necessary, the text is often an expressive part of the art and your ability to replicate that is lacking but also unnecessary it's far better to let the artist tell the story with their own art skills, prioritise your time where it actually matters and stop removing all the original sound effects. take a look at the flip page and see for yourself the difference in expressiveness.
having looked over the chapter again more critically and comparing it to the raws, you ought to stop redrawing except where strictly necessary, the text is often an expressive part of the art and your ability to replicate that is lacking but also unnecessary it's far better to let the artist tell the story with their own art skills, prioritise your time where it actually matters and stop removing all the original sound effects. take a look at the flip page and see for yourself the difference in expressiveness.