Thanks for the translation. It does usually flow better in comparison but I can't help but be concerned when there are such big differences between versions, like how Ivona says it's too late to help the children (yet she still managed to summon a second beast to release them before the Knight did anything remotely useful)
Or how after Ivona captured the auction head, he says "what's going on?" but the bubble seems to point to the duke (plus he has his mouth open in that panel)
It's not a big deal as long as it doesn't affect actual plot-related bubbles, though, it's just me nitpicking a bit