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[depzdai]

Disgusting.

 

[rttnlich]

Everything from translation to typesetting could use a lot more effort, to the point I don't even know where to start pointing out what's wrong.

My advice is get some people with experience to help you. If you're going to do it so half-assedly, especially knowing someone else's doing it far better than you, it's just better not to do it at all.

There are people who view these in sites which rip the pages off from MangaDex. Usually they only get the first release, because that's how those sites work. If that release happens to be trashy, they likely won't ever see the better one, more so because most of those people probably don't even know what MangaDex is or how the chapters get to the sites they read from.

 

[Kuroageha]

@Ninjafoo
And don't forget the imouto is in it too lmao.

 

[Atsuro]

Thank you for the translation.
A poorly typeset chapter with a couple grammar mistakes is better than no chapter.

 

[reveluvza]

i don't think anything here is too bad considering it's one person, i think that was needlessly rude @rttnlchr
wait for /a/ if you're so keen on quality

 

[nightmoves17]

The mom wants Sakurai's dick, probably more than Hana does. Maybe it's a good thing the sister didn't stay home.

 

[Kayriel]

You dumbasses. NTR isn't going to happen. Tsuki will talk herself into it, and be ready for him to put the big dick in. But he himself wouldn't NTR. We've seen zero reason to believe he's remotely interested in Tsuki, he's never even blushed at her unless talking about cats. We've never seen a single panel of him even realizing she HAS an impressive body.

Now, do I want him to tap that? Hell yes. Hana's sister, too. Hell why not top her brother, with that.

But this already has its own story, it's not a porn.

 

[Ninjafoo]

@Kuroageha Just waiting for her to meet senpai now. That's when the real party starts.

 

[rttnlich]

For people who just read and don't do any translation/cleaning/redrawing/typesetting, sure.

I could also solo a chapter, I dunno, maybe invent some sentences, use MS Paint, or type in Cooper Black, and it'll still be not too bad because considering it's made by one person. Is that right? @reveluvza

 

[albertcookie302]

nah im convinced she wants his pipe
also not rlly dat big of a deal but im the 69 comment nice

 

[Asphyxia]

The more netorare, the better. Hopefully it continues.

 

[Doomroar]

Wow she is really insisting on her fantasy, she probably has already had a couple of escapades behind her husband's back.

 

[MegaAnime]

Soon more porn will explode from this

 

[Chroniko]

The mother thing is getting tiresome. I think we need more imouto deban instead.

 

[FlyingCowCanFly]

Thank you for translating and posting it here. Please ignore what the pathetic leeches have to tell.

 

[bocchiron]

bruh

 

[Hollow7F]

sweet god the mom is so down with it i cant even ....

 

[R0aX]

At first I didn't like the mother, but I'm starting to laugh a lot with her

 

[Variousletters]

A few notes - thanks for doing this though anon.

Should be "got" to embrace her, shouldn't it? Since it's past tense not something he's about to do.
Usually also: "on my mind" rather than "in my mind".
"since you first tried", not "since you first try".
It's plenty readable, just, past tense is written a little differently from present.

edit: How long before mom starts picturing her other daughter in there rather than just Hana and herself?

 

[Hopeofdespair]

She’s married, be loyal!