A Parallel World With a 1:39 Male to Female Ratio Is Unexpectedly Normal - Ch. 181 - "It's Okay! It's Okay!"

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Page 8, "Hearing other women moan makes feelings complicated" sounds weird but I don't know how to correct it based on the context. Maybe "Hearing other women moan gives me complicated feelings"?
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There's a few things you could say. I'm generally okay with a little bit of creative liberalization so long as the intent and any important context or character speech patterns remains there.

I would probably go with "but I don't know how to feel about hearing other women moan..." or something like that
But if you want to keep the wording and just fix the grammar then yeah, "Hearing other women moan gives me mixed/complicated feelings..." works too
 
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She’s reaping what she sowed & did this to herself. She might be a different person moving forward. Don’t let Suzuki know because otherwise he’ll lose it. Glad to be caught up & thanks @BB-62 for doing all these chapters.

Edit: Probably a good time to mention but if you guys really want to support the series, volume 2 got released. Please support if you can since I want to see this last a bit longer.
How can those of us in the U.S. support this? Want to know please.
 
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Yuri exorcism going smoothly good job mc make her reach transcendence


Ps fk the snip another for the block list
 

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