There is a small typo in the last paragraph on page 6. "I don't want people to know tha I use a,". A "t" is missing at the end of "that".I was asked to try to pick this up as well as the English version, what do you think? I did it by translating directly from Indonesian to English... if it's good, I'll catch up with the Indonesian version soon.
Btw, if there are any mistranslations or grammatical mistakes, please just tell me without hesitation, I will fix it as soon as possible.
Thank you, I will fix it...There is a small typo in the last paragraph on page 6. "I don't want people to know tha I use a,". A "t" is missing at the end of "that".
Hopefully this is more helpful than annoying, because I do appreciate the effort you are putting in here. The translation itself look pretty good.
From now on, I will invite you girls to play the "rotating sushi (pussy) game" with my condom-covered dick!
all seemed to flow fine to me, im just glad its been picked up again so keep up the good work.I was asked to try to pick this up as well as the English version, what do you think? I did it by translating directly from Indonesian to English... if it's good, I'll catch up with the Indonesian version soon.
Btw, if there are any mistranslations or grammatical mistakes, please just tell me without hesitation, I will fix it as soon as possible.