@Retard_
Thanks for the chapter!
Just thought I'd add a couple of corrections here for you to do what you want with
"The successful completion of this quest will play a vital role in influencing the preceding quests that are to come"
Here, "preceding" is in opposition with "that are to come". If they are to come, they can't also be preceding. Just pick one and remove the other
"Above and beyond the expectation"
"the" is unneeded here. The text should be "above and beyond expectations".
"you will need to guide him using your knowledge of the maesil"
I would say "the" is a bit clumsy here as well, you can remove it. (He's talking about maesil in general, not these specific ones)
"If you are able to satisfied the estemeed guests"
"satisfied" should be "satisfy"