I was thinking the same thing. This version seems a bit more.. disjointed.The translation is good for the most part, but there are a few bits where the translation from the original anthology were of higher quality.
I look forward to you continuing translating the rest of the series regardless of at however.
also the untranslated text when our dear PM takes Luka is something to the effect of "Not the eyes Luka!"
Also he looks like an actual evil shoujo character and not a generic bishonenI forgot to tell my respects to the director guy cuz he's one of the few male characters that sees her true loving self
And NOT simp for her and wish for the husband to die