Akumade Amai Watashi no Kanojo - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - First Date (Part 1)

[MangaDex]

 

[Dekker]

I wonder if this counts as a cooking manga with how much she's devouring Ms Sugar sweet


Thanks for the chapter!

 

[DavidianMillerian]

I wonder if this counts as a cooking manga with how much she's devouring Ms Sugar sweet


Thanks for the chapter!

no, the difference is, cooking mama lets you cook, here, she's BEING cooked

or is it baked?

 

[monkymeet]

Oh jeez

 

[MISHIRU2407]

I'm getting diabetes from this sweetness

Thank you for this chapter!

 

[Orangechrisy]

That last page 😳😳

 

[T-sama]

Humans taste bitter if they're not enjoying themselves
Mai is sugary-sweet during the date
If she's already sugary-sweet with just the date and the kiss, how sweet she'll get when they have sex?
Riri gonna get diabetes

 

[Fuckyouface]

Editing isn't bad for how few works you've done, but there's some things that were bothering me
You far too often put ellipses on a separate line even when there's space to place them, I suspect this is because you use box text with not a big enough border, causing PS to mess with the text shape, to which should be more akin to an egg shape (not always applicable so go with box or diamond in certain cases, editor's judgement for these
RIri's casual font is a bit messy and its leading is open, I'd suggest something similar to Mai's speech font
For redrawing I would say to practice and attempt ones that are mainly lines, screentones are annoying and take some tricks to get right to I'd suggest fiddling with those whenever you want them to look better

 

[Firedragon128v]

I understand having a weakness to pretty girls but the MC really needs help 😭
That girl isn’t just a red flag, she’s a fucking crimson garrison flag

 

[Raptorofwar]

It's such a gorgeous shade of crimson, though.

 

[Yasushi_15]

Thank you for your work!!

 

[A-Dashing-Rogue]

I guessing the store clerk asked them if they were going in the changing room together because she could feel all the Thirst-ness in the air.

 

[Manko-sensei]

Not sure if they're snipping it or Yuritart decided not to continue it but, anyway, the succubus knows her better than herself.

 

[Yuri_Enjoyer_Deluxe]

Would.

 

[emmadrew]

This is just too much! I impulse switched tabs from sweetness overload, like 7 separate times in 20 pages

 

[Roodypatooti]

She's such a messy eater

 

[DerpyVenom]

how am i going to explain this to my japanese friend. she's going to see me in a different light

 

[Cornonthekopp]

Thank you for the TL! I have a suggestion for the credits at the end. Since this is a story about sweets maybe you should include a sugar stat in the nutrition labels as a theming thing lol

 

[ARandomBot]

Thanks for translating

 

[nueee]

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