Akuyaku Kizoku ga Hirakinaotte Hametsu Furagu o Jitsuryoku de Hataki Otteitara, Itsunomanika Hirointachi Kara Eiyuushi Sareru you ni Natta ken - Vol.…

[Zhangar]

I wish the MC was the maid and not the one we actually got.

 

[Weebman0]

Were the chapters released like this, cut in half?

Or are you cutting them up and publishing half a chapter at a time?

 

[Kosnope]

It's just because they're cutting all of the annoying training scenes down to the bare minimum and getting straight to the fun parts.

Although a good writer can make the training montages fun as well by having a cheerfully homicidal training instructor.

what training, what fun parts? Saintess is introduced, then 3 pages later they are already shown defeated in a forest, and in these 3 pages they talked with some knight captain who appeared in the story out of nowhere, agreed to go on an adventure, called saintess stupid, talked about saintess looking for a hero at the banquet, and also travelled all the way there with the marques daughter referencing their defeat ("I slipped up"). And then it's immediately back to MC.
It's a mess, not 'skipping boring parts'

 

[Galder]

thanks for the translation. very unusual art- and clothing style, but seems interesting, albeit clichéd.

 

[Carn109]

Based Celeshia telling the story

 

[Lightbrand]

So is the saint at the party or not? What's the confusion?

 

[Psychronia]

Is anyone else having trouble telling the girls apart? They should have distinct looks, but they're constantly blurring together for me.

 

[WalkingTargetPractice]

I really like the monster designs

 

[Blacklight110]

Idk I feel like I like this but I’m having trouble keeping up. The pacing just feels weird. Anyone else?

Same. One moment they're having a party and then next in the middle of a battle with no setup, the monster immediately leaving without explanation and suddenly the others are already on their feet and evacuating? Even the bandits from the previous chapter didn't last more than ten pages. They rushing or something? In the beginning? It feels like a watered down version of a novel. Does this one have it?

 

[Druhms]

Damn, these monster designs are cool af,