I wrote this someplace else, but I'll post it here too. To all those who thought the story was shite.
"TL of the second half here.
Being a big Jiro Matsumoto fan, I didn't really feel like the story's pacing was off at any given moment. It maybe didn't feel as mature as Freesia, but I suppose that was because he came up with the story a long time ago and kept things somewhat light(?), aside from all the corpse raping and slaughter of course.
It's that car chase at the end of volume 4 with almost everybody dying that felt like the climax of the story for me. From there on it slowed down nicely with a last bang when Kenji's army invaded Alamo.
That said, I don't think most people get Alice's roll in the story though. She's not human and was never meant to have any kind of personality. It's a cursed doll that absolutely ruined any chance of Shuu ever redeeming himself by simply being there for him. There was never any need for her to show her true "mission" sort of speak until Shuu became doubtful of his own actions.
In the end, though, I honestly believe this story isn't meant to be taken too seriously. Jiro Matsumoto likes screwing around, defying the reader's expectations, but still ending everything in a balanced way. You could argue that Shuu represents evil/chaos and Eliza represents good/hope, exactly like they real world."