Main character feels less than one dimensional. Idk if it’s because the author is trying to make her look meek, but it’s possible while not making her not look like she doesn’t think. Maybe display more of her thoughts, add a psychological aspect. Not just make her think “I’m scared. He’s scary. Run.” Feels like watching those deer on highway videos. And she’s literally trying to get herself catapulted to death by moving traffic too.
Oh shoot. This is my first time reading the comments, did not realize that my sentiment was common.