This has some problems, i would say lack of experience, mostly.
Its a decent plot, a nice art and not terrible characters. Yes, not more than that.
But it has it's good points, worth the read if you don't have something obviously better waiting.
The world exposure is very vague, I think it's because we only know as much as the fl knows, which I don't find to be a bad thing, the Ml (as of now) seems quite shallow, has spent most of his screen time saying that it can't be, and there are some obvious scenes that just aren't well put together.... but I have hope, it seems it can be a good one, there's been no mistakes as of now, it can grow, is what I believe.
An 8 for now