An Introvert's Hookup Hiccups: This Gyaru Is Head Over Heels for Me! - Ch. 21

[NoobGuyRuby]

What in the actual fucking terminator is this build? Looks so weird.

yeah the art has been all over the place as the time goes on.

The art has been deteriorating in quality for quite a while. Starting somewhere from around chapter 12/13 the faces are all weird.
Now a lot of things is just wrong.

Wrong placement of the mouth sometimes.
Faces are too tall. Causing the jaw (that is already sharp) more sharp you can mine diamonds with it
MC's shoulders are so wide right now he looks like wearing a macho body suit. Just compare his body in this page in chapter 1!

His body looked waaaay better in the example given by StackTracer here

 

[SubjectT17]

Two weeks, only two weeks have passed? That will be a loooong time before the cofession. Also is it only me or has art gotten worse with every chapter, anatomy looks completely off. And the haircut is still horrendous.

 

[emMeBi86]

How many children gets lost during a romcom date? Ratio is almost 1:1, sometimes they are around even if it's not an official date

 

[Swordhaxor]

Yuki-chan manga debut. Yay!

 

[lesseffective]

Nice forearm definition on every page.

What in the actual fucking terminator is this build? Looks so weird.

Okay but why is he suddenly so fucking ripped

Must be an effect of Nanami's dad's shirt. It imbued him with being absolutely swole.

 

[pepinotomate]

Bruh, characters proportions are getting worse and worse over time, wonder how they will look like by the time this end lmao

 

[Swordhaxor]

"Can I call you Daddy?"

The fact that he tanked an instant kill move like that, and responded in kind, is truly admirable. Even after the shitty haircut nerf, he remains a powerful character.

That being said, it really feels like this series is hesitating to get to the actual meat of the plot - namely the fact that this relationship was built on a lie. I'm sure it'll be resolved easily enough, since he knows she asked him out as part of a punishment game and is clearly receptive to the fact that she actually likes him. But I'd at least like to see it addressed. The longer it lingers, the more I become concerned that it's going to lead to a lot of pointless melodrama.

Well, manga is still in the LN vol 2 chapters, while the "Deciding point" is at the end of volume 4...

 

[danvolodar]

I guess they already met there when they were kids, that’s why she says she is weirdly confortable with him there.

He's literally wearing her dad's clothes.

Which kinda brings me to the question - is that... normal in Japan? To wear hand-me-downs from the in-laws? Not, like, to work in the garden or something, but actually to go out?

 

[blablablub]

So two weeks have passed. Two more to go until the big "reveal". Which I'm still thinking is gonna end up as a normal day for them, both going home and Nanami never losing a single word about the dare.

 

[tairar]

Well, manga is still in the LN vol 2 chapters, while the "Deciding point" is at the end of volume 4...

So two weeks have passed. Two more to go until the big "reveal". Which I'm still thinking is gonna end up as a normal day for them, both going home and Nanami never losing a single word about the dare.

I guess I'll check back in 20 more chapters then

 

[ciera]

Wew

 

[ShinduPK4]

What the fuck? Am I the only one here who finds the whole “daddy” and “mommy” thing rather weird in a situation where they aren't even comfortable with the fact that they're dating? This felt like a very cheap and forced setup to the “we have a baby together” situation that will obviously unfold in the next chapter because of that kid at the end.

Edit: Forgot to mention something — she asked to call him “daddy” just after mentioning that he resembles her real father. How is this shit not wierd?

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Also, reading this feels odd because the author seems to only have two or three different facial expressions that he constantly uses. Go through the entire chapter and look at the main couple's expressions. 90% of the time, they have the same grinning expression.

 

[Totemslap]

Well, manga is still in the LN vol 2 chapters, while the "Deciding point" is at the end of volume 4...

Well shit. That's not very reassuring.

 

[mattserino]

Why's she all freaky all of a sudden?

 

[DHMaster]

This chapter made me feel very gaga.

Unfortunately for some, we had to forgo "wet" and go with the much more wholesome "gaga".

On a more serious note, the original is basically "It [Youshin being this handsome] makes me fall for you all over again", which is super awkward no matter how you try to put it because this has to fit in one bubble by itself.

Instead, we went with "gaga" since it carries somewhat similar themes while fitting well with the constraints at hand.

 

[Nilinor]

People wondering why she is so assertive:

At this point, she really loves him. She still planning to tell the truth at the end of the dare, but wants him to be so in love with her that when she confesses again (for real) that he wouldn't want to break up with her after the dare is revealed.

 

[Genzerum]

Unfortunately for some, we had to forgo "wet" and go with the much more wholesome "gaga".

On a more serious note, the original is basically "It [Youshin being this handsome] makes me fall for you all over again", which is super awkward no matter how you try to put it because this has to fit in one bubble by itself.

Instead, we went with "gaga" since it carries somewhat similar themes while fitting well with the constraints at hand.

No, but really, what the fuck means "gaga" xD The only "gaga" I know are Lady Gaga and "gugu-gaga" as a sound made by babies.

 

[Regalia13]

Mommy and daddy
then a daughter came out
what is this? daughter summoning ritual?
welp, it'll be the lost kid happenings isn't it

 

[Swordhaxor]

No, but really, what the fuck means "gaga" xD The only "gaga" I know are Lady Gaga and "gugu-gaga" as a sound made by babies.

Well the meaning of that sentence can also mean she got shivers looking at him

 

[Lucas852m]

It has been so much time since last chapter was released I almost forgot how awful his hair is