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@Hope2009
Yeah, I was thinking the same thing: "Curse you Tabata!" is hysterical.
The story itself unfolds at a nice pace. The brash younger brother letting some of his emotions slip through is also a nice change of pace.
The teacher's reaction and detection of what the boy's doing was good too, as this is the sort of thing too many stories mishandle, and try to pit the teacher against the protagonist. His casual detection of the truth behind what's happening along with his gentle dealing with the boy was refreshing.
Yeah, I was thinking the same thing: "Curse you Tabata!" is hysterical.
The story itself unfolds at a nice pace. The brash younger brother letting some of his emotions slip through is also a nice change of pace.
The teacher's reaction and detection of what the boy's doing was good too, as this is the sort of thing too many stories mishandle, and try to pit the teacher against the protagonist. His casual detection of the truth behind what's happening along with his gentle dealing with the boy was refreshing.