Arafoo Shachiku no Golem Master - Vol. 1 Ch. 2 - Hands-on Training

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Why would you not keep one golem to keep the prisoners in check? basic police tactic, leave a person to watch over detainees..... I am sure even the Japanese does that.

I get it, I get it, they need a plot device but could have made it at least somewhat interesting....
 
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lol wtf the proportions of that kid are so weird when the guys holding her up
 
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@Izaya_Onisai ah yes i read it 20min ago. it seem good but will need lot of time, if they dont drop before (cause of people who want isekai with only fight fight fight some boobs fight fight fight and boobs and no world building)
 
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he really need to shut up about all that slave company term .-.
its funny the first time but its just annoyingly confusing after that
 
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I got to the part where the guy took a hostage that came out of thin air and I find myself completely lost on what the fuck is supposed to be going on. MC drops into world op as fuck (horribly written), nothing abnormal there, randomly finds treasure (horribly written), completely average, solves hostage situation that doesn't even need to exist (the worst writing I have ever read for this recycled scene), and finds a beastman who seems completely competent before randomly throwing around the word "Slave".

I don't- who was the publisher for this? I feel like they just looked at the writer and said "Do it again but overdose on adderall first". It's like they took the script, threw it in a blender with mayonnaise and autism, then threw in a fuckload of paper dolls for the fun of it and poured that shit in a fountain pen before writing whatever the fuck this is supposed to be. That or the writer is 13. I wouldn't be so hard on it if it were Shounen, which is exactly why I'm being hard on it. It's Seinen.

Just read to the end. I can literally feel my brain cells fornicating in a last ditch effort to repopulate my brain before they all die of cancer. Ngl, last scene is arguably the best thus far and, while I can say I don't mind rando lolis, a no personality "Master-Sama" beastman slave getting stabbed does not disappoint me. The whole gate scene was retarded though, giant army approaching from the horizon means its arrow time, and no arrows were fired, which means I am disappoint
 
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Why the Last Scene is the Best Scene;

~ Fuck the "Master Sama" Loli
~ Fuck You

Explanation

Queso Bandito is clearly of some regard to El Capi-tan considering his title which is significantly cooler than he is. He has battle scars, buddy boi is a tough boi, he's a slaver without remorse or question and goes for the kill from round 1, truly the best boi thus far. He analyzed a sichiashiun (situation for you plebians who don't get jokes) where his oppressor made his main attack force disperse like a retard, which was lucky as fuck considering MC has a bitchface and looked scared as fuck without his cuck squad, which turned immediately into a shit eating grin, kinda like every entitled male antagonist in any school reincarnation manga who's tough until the MC's tough. In short, MC is a bitch.

Continuing, Queso Bandito took the opportunity to destroy the bigest threat, the mage. He can't run since the golems can track them and do it quickly, and he knows he can't fight a hundred. There are only so many guards, and he has confidence he can escape them, so destroying the only real threat to himself and his bois is the best way to succeed and escape alive. He quickly assumed the best course of action and was thwarted by PURE COINCIDENCE since beastycunt randomly went Murabito desu ga nani ka Lilith Mode on our asses. If he DID kill the magic fucker, he would be in the clear, since he clearly had the skill to earn himself a name. Chances are his boys would be able to escape as well once their safety was assured, or he would quickly dispose of their binds and the group would be able to band and conquer. This fast deduction of strategy would have allowed them the perfecct chance to retaliate and escape if it literally weren't for shitty plot.

Also if the shape shifting loli gets back up I'm dead. We have enough lolis and Futoku no Guild exists.
 
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Knew there'd be a loli but I saw no Ecchi tag so I thought it was safe, close to dropping this weird Japanese shit.
 
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this is what happens when you show mercy to bad people, why can't isekai MC's fucking understand this? you kill anyone that tried to kill you, it's simple
 

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