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Ah, lazy writing! Telling us he's nice when we've only seen 1 decent act from him (not a good or heroic act, just a decent one which should've been natural!) and not really showing us. Unbelievable.
And he stupid.
Why would anyone ever think that an empire with vast territories, conquered kingdoms and different cultures/languages will be always peaceful?
Ah, sorry, all these things lessen the enjoyment of the story. I'm still teetering on the edge whether I should drop this. I'm not that curious, just a little bit. Because Chloe, with all her naivety and annoying characteristics, is still likeable and so I want some good stuff to happen to her. But that isn't really enough to save the story, is it?
And he stupid.
Why would anyone ever think that an empire with vast territories, conquered kingdoms and different cultures/languages will be always peaceful?
Ah, sorry, all these things lessen the enjoyment of the story. I'm still teetering on the edge whether I should drop this. I'm not that curious, just a little bit. Because Chloe, with all her naivety and annoying characteristics, is still likeable and so I want some good stuff to happen to her. But that isn't really enough to save the story, is it?