Biryuu Enshoutan ~Jikokouteikan ga Gekitei na Dragon-kyuu Bishoujo Maou o, Yuusha ga Icharabu de Taijisuru Ohanashi~ - Ch. 13

[Encyclopedium]

Oooh now we're getting interesting. The p9rn content was just a reader hook and now we're in the meat and potatoes of the tale. Iver's recovery with the I love yous bit was pretty hamfisted rushed, amongst other things but we needed a mcguffin for better mental health. The meld between "hentai" and story elements with comedy is weird at times but it was the theme the author started with so he had to sprinkle enough before it became an entirely different dish

I do wish they saved the two of them having sex after a time period where it would be more meaningful, to them and us the readers. Right now, its just a plot device
Anyways, I think I can give this tale a passing grade

 

[Kaitensatsuma]

What is this, Plot?
IN MY MAOU PORN?
I WOULD LIKE TO SPEAK TO A MANAGER

Oooh now we're getting interesting. The p9rn content was just a reader hook and now we're in the meat and potatoes of the tale. Iver's recovery with the I love yous bit was pretty hamfisted rushed, amongst other things but we needed a mcguffin for better mental health. The meld between "hentai" and story elements with comedy is weird at times but it was the theme the author started with so he had to sprinkle enough before it became an entirely different dish

I do wish they saved the two of them having sex after a time period where it would be more meaningful, to them and us the readers. Right now, its just a plot device
Anyways, I think I can give this tale a passing grade

At least it isn't that other labyrinth manga with the slave dog girl and they have so much sex it literally stops the plot from going forward

 

[SalvySaroj]

Another pain in the a** development..