It's a fun read, and I love her character, but I am with the people saying that the author probably knows next to nothing about games, or at least RPGs. My biggest niggle is that in the vast majority of games that use stats like dexterity and vitality, vitality usually improves both defense and HP. In fact, it usually improves HP first and defense second, hence the name Vitality. At 170 VIT, her HP should be a minimum 890, assuming HP should only go up by 5 per point.