Boku no Ikezu na Konyakusha - Ch. 24.1

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Sorata also needs to (and deserves to) learn what it's like to be truly & actually valued, expressed to his face. Miyuki hasn't done that; arguably the only person who has is Takaomi, and I'm pretty certain we're not swerving into BL with this series, as much as I think it would actually improve things.

But Sorata's gotten the short end of the stick since way back when they were kids; not only was his future decided for him by a couple old farts, he still earnestly put his all into trying to learn about Miyuki and make her happy, and we're now more than a decade on and he's been reduced to:

  • enduring constant low-level harassment from all of their peers at school who at best don't believe they're engaged, and at worst actively deride him and his poor showing compared to her superhuman capability;
  • being vilified by Merry/Mary, who ostensibly should have warmed up to him more by now, but is still met with hostility whenever she deludes herself into thinking Miyuki's being hurt by Sorata;
  • being effectively conditioned and manipulated by Ayano into believing that Miyuki despises him, and that everything she says to him is a backhanded insult because of the dialect issue;
  • putting himself down and working himself to the bone to try and measure up to Miyuki, because everyone around him (save Takaomi) tells him he's not good enough. Even when they were at the cafe in Kyoto and Miyuki's old friends showed up being like "surely this wimp isn't your boyfriend, also why did you go to such a shitty school?" and he had to stand up for Miyuki, while she said nothing in his defense.
Sorata doesn't have the allies he should in this series, as even Takaomi only ever really tries to help him when they're alone, and gets run over by both Miyuki and Merry otherwise...plus, he has his own stuff to deal with, being a child actor who gets recognized and accosted whenever they go somewhere together.



I'm not a fan of romantic rivals, but that's because they're generally there to shove drama into a narrative that doesn't often need it in that specific manner. But here?
Sorata should have someone who sees him for all the good that he is and does, and who will validate him to his face in no uncertain terms. I'm not going to be an idiot and wish for Miyuki to actually lose in the romance game being played, because that is a fool's errand what with how perfect she's written and how hopelessly in love with her Sorata is. But I fully admit that I want her to suffer watching Sorata be happy around someone else who isn't afraid to say what they mean and treat him with actual respect and dignity, even if the end result is Miyuki finally pulling her head out of her asshole and making up her mind as to whether Sorata actually means anything to her, and then acting like it's the case.
They’re mentally torturing and gas lighting so how tf does this manga have so much a high rating? I never read a romance where the Mc is actually trying his best to better his life, express his feelings, work for love under horrible conditions, the whole fucking cast hates him except for his bl partner. The woman his cherishes is never recuperating his feelings. I feel like this shit is a bad nightmare bro he’s a kid
 
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Author-San blue Ballz harder than Rent-a-Girlfriend. I share sentiment above that no one here is likeable anymore. ML is a spineless simp, FL is an arrogant and selfish biatch, her brother is scum, probably her whole family is scum, and everyone else is just an annoying puppy with sprinkles. I've dropped this before and came back because responses to my comments had made me revisit and hit several chapters at once, which works better than the monthly dip of frustration. Plus there are the part chapters. I think I'll drop it again, since the payoff is never going to be worth it now.
Imagine being mentally tortured since a child and the woman you love has let everyone plus strangers shit on you and she shits on you as well. Imagine your fiancé family has been hating you for awhile and the fmc can’t even give him words of encouragement. I hate spineless mc but he’s not spineless, just a simp who needs actual help fam
 
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We need a "dreaming realist" wake up moment for our boy here. Something that she says, even just thinking she's "joking around" with her friends, that makes him go "... what am I doing?"

Imagine you get a chapter where he's still chasing her, and it ends with her being pressured by her friends to be derisive of him (not fully Mean, since she's not against him, but just... puts him down in a joke because she's embarrassed). And at the end of the chapter, it shows him walking away from having overheard it.
Next chapter then becomes just on him reflecting over what's happened the past few months, all these little moments where he's tried his best only for her to brush him off because she's "too embarrassed" to treat him like a real person and respond to his honest feelings.
From there, you could get an entire arc of him kind of pulling away. Lookin to himself, seeing what HE wants to do with his life. What are his hobbies, what is he like aside from her? Could even have a tension where the family is in his side because they are tired of her leading him along (or just tired of her not taking things seriously when he clearly was).
Maybe add a romantic rival, maybe don't. Either way you have an interesting arc of him walking back, and it can lead into an arc where it's about her figuring herself out, and chasing after HIM in exchange. Maybe she tries to ask him on a date, but he's busy and doesn't realize what she's asking because she's not being clear. Have this happen until she is open and honest, and THEN he'll respond.
I want this to happen so bad, man.
 

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