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Chapter 28 = Series was axed, open ending.At this rate the rest of the chapters are going to be.
Chapter 24 = no you
Chapter 25 = NO U
chapter 26= No but also you
Chapter 27 = No but actually you
Chapter 28 = Series was axed, open ending.At this rate the rest of the chapters are going to be.
Chapter 24 = no you
Chapter 25 = NO U
chapter 26= No but also you
Chapter 27 = No but actually you
Not axed just short source materialChapter 28 = Series was axed, open ending.
Tbf, The One Within the Villainess spent it's whole run showing you how the mc wove the noose for the heroine to hang herself with.The one within the Villainess did this kind of scene in a satisfying manner in about 2-3 chapters? This in comparison feels like its being milked dry.
but shes not really accused of any kind of crime, and theres no proof to back it up, all she has to do is muddle their accusations enough that people cant really say they're true, and since shes going second she gets the last wordIt would still be difficult.
Brandolini's law: The amount of energy needed to refute bullshit is an order of magnitude bigger than that needed to produce it.
The One Within the Villainess used the confrontation as the final bit of pay off.Tbf, The One Within the Villainess spent it's whole run showing you how the mc wove the noose for the heroine to hang herself with.
This MC seems to largely just wait and react to the heroine's bs when it shows up. She might prepare but, it waits till things blow up to show it for the most part so far.
I can't say that's necessarily a bad thing but, the former definitely feels better written than the latter for sure.
It's also why it seems like it's dragging on, from where I'm sitting.The One Within the Villainess used the confrontation as the final bit of pay off.
This manga is trying to use the confrontation as the major conflict, which kind of works. I think that more of the story should have been dedicated to setting up what they were doing, so it comes off like a proper confrontation. Right now, either character can pull anything and it would be on the table, because we are being told what they did to prepare while the conflict is going on.