This is quite good for a first time, I hope it was somewhat fun, and I'm sure things will streamline for you some as you get more practice in. I really enjoyed the bonus pages exploring your choices, it was some neat insight.
Thanks for this, must have followed it at some point in the past since it popped up randomly like this. And yeah it looked good in my opinion. I do like the way the artist draws the wolves here, though given the cover art it's clear that at least the main one that brought him there is going to shapeshift at some point.