this is my first time ever translating so thanks for the feedback!!! ill do my best
This is a first for me... not often I see a sniper sharing part of my online ID.
As for feedback, can only say you chose your first series poorly. Oh I get the desire for immediate feedback, but any attention you get will be viewed thrue the lens of discontent and in some cases outright hatred.
In almost every case it is much more preferably to find something that has a hood number of translated chapters, yet hasn't been updated in half a year.