Daredemo Dakeru Kimi ga Suki Kakinaoshi zen Shiroku-shu - Vol. 4 Ch. 35 - (Old) You're So Lewd, Agawa

[Schernobyl]

for me l would like to see this go the route of the OG work as that ending is really good

What's the ending of the OG work?

 

[Iskarioth]

You are kinda almost right about some things and I do agree with some statements here but you are missing some points yourself: the NTR -definition- is clear, no doubt but language changes and the term NTR is a bit more than "couple and most often woman gets stolen physically and mentally". There is nuances and there is NTR like this here in the sense that we, the readers and MC who people relate to the most and who is the main pov of the story create a bond with a certain character.

"She wasn't secretly fucking around or cheating" well, yeah. Everyone knew she is open for any dude at any time. This incident is something entirely different, tho. It is happening right after major plot (confession) and progress. It is stupidly forced but whatever, that is a different problem. It just does not fit her character and what the manga has been at all and it feels more like NTR than any other happening thus far.

Also, this is not marketed as an "I can fix her", lol. People screaming "It is NTR and should be!" aren't retarded. They are misguided by the belief that this is going to be an exact copy of the finished (I think) original NTR-hentai. But it simply isn't even trying to sell as "I can fix her"- almost all hentai-to-mainstream manga are marketed as such; hentai that is released as a manga toning down on the hentai aspects but still going for the same story. It is the exact same as Mizuryuu Kei's "luvslave", NTR hentai that is toned down and released in a normal magazine, same as "Karami Zakari", a heavy NTR hentai/story that was changed (extremely weird, offputting design choices...) to be released in a mag catering towards younger readers.

Big hentai artists/authors are sadly chasing this trend lately of almost only releasing NTR stories in a format fit for mainstream magazines, being read by teens and young adults. I do think it is morally questionable but they never pretend that their manga is something it isn't. It is straight up porn in nicer clothes.
Also, people can complain about this chapter all they want, you should chill. It clearly is a bit out of left field and not the best writing wise. Not every story is 100% perfect, true but they can decide themselves if they want to drop this.

Yes, the current chapter sure does get closer to NTR, you are right. To clarify, I meant the general story so far hasn't been true NTR and I wager it won't really go there anymore. That might be false hope but I don't think it actually sells, especially given where the story went. Except for those few "undesirables" ofc, the majority of readers are probably people who got baited by the strong " I can fix her" - vibe. That's what I meant, so at least in my eyes, the author would be a huge fool to now go full NTR because what comes afterwards ? ( Aside from many ragequitting readers).
Oh and about the last point: I meant to say - it's too early for those emotions. Should it go down that route ai would fully understand the reaction.

 

[Dragonknight50]

This story is go end up very similar to the hental version. The story just now has more of a coherent plot because Agawa did get caught and expelled from school due to her sexual acts. This go backfire on her because now more adults are catching her and those that are creeps will blackmail her.

I’m expecting a similar situation to happen in this official version.

 

[Dragonknight50]

What's the ending of the OG work?

They end up fucking, Agawa becomes a housewife, MC gets a job. All well that ends well

 

[wallsg]

Do we think Agawa is going to stop doing the teacher because Gotou shows up or will it be a wait until he's gone situation? First situation may indicate a change in her. Though I doubt that will happen because she's still being her true slut self at school.

Overall I don't think Gotou will be able to fix her and the story won't delve into the reason for Agawas behaviour.

If she throws open the curtain it will be Sensei open to blackmail. With her word and a witness it may be taken seriously. The witness may end up getting accused but he never saw them getting busy because they never did.

 

[Thyme.Minister]

They end up fucking, Agawa becomes a housewife, MC gets a job. All well that ends well

lol i remember skimming thru the japanese raws, couldn't find an english translated version on N

 

[Thyme.Minister]

Gotta bet my remaining 2 bucks that Gotou will end up being humilliated and ashamed by Agawa and her sex pals for going Captain Save-a-ho without Agawa asking him to do so, with the risk of ending myself poor and starvating. She already rejected him and went back to her old ways, so can see more misery for our NTRd protag to justify a possible rape scenario from Prez and the whore rangers.

This derailed a lot from the source material. And i'm liking it. It's like watching a keicar going beyond 250 km/h and disintegrating into a fireball after crashing against a toll booth.

the scenario is much different now, you're right in that Agawa does not ask to be saved, but here she is being explicitly blackmailed by an adult, which she herself explains she does not normally do it with.

 

[Kushikime]

Thanks for the chapter

 

[nocomply]

god i miss bitches like this, an easy lay like agawa is rare. there was this one girl in my high school that would do anything if she thought you were attractive enough

 

[E_]

Based ugly bastard NTR! The beta wimp shitty mc deserves it

 

[ysil69]

And who are they going to believe?

In the real world? The student claiming sexual harassment. Easily.

In make believe hentai NTR land with idiot logic the teacher.

 

[chusetto]

Chad bro is gonna smash some teacher's balls

 

[Pigroee]

Is there really not a single rational adult with morals teaching at this school? Before people bring up the female teacher from chapter 11, it was implied in the volume 2 extra that she is hooking with Inukai. Jesus this is really going to bring down the ratings for this manga (not that it has been high to begin with since it is at 6.73). Gotou is going to be depressed if he finds what is going on. Thanks for the translations.

It's based on a porno and made by the guy who made the porno.
It has the same logic as Brazzers.
You don't need to take it seriously to begin with

 

[Knighto]

ntr in this series?.... wait, that's the same as always, author really trying to try new tropes

 

[noj]

From herself? She's the whore proposing this. He turned down a threesome and now she's open to fucking some dirty old fat teacher?

MC needs to grow a pair and move on.

No she wasnt. He is forcing her so she wont get in trouble. The teacher is awful.

 

[Kitsune_115]

I don't like this turn of events...

 

[ysil69]

No she wasnt. He is forcing her so she wont get in trouble. The teacher is awful.

"Forcing" even though she took his pants off herself...

 

[idk234]

They are misguided by the belief that this is going to be an exact copy of the finished (I think) original NTR-hentai.

but the original had a good ending, they split up for a bit after getting in trouble and she went back to her BF, but then MC met her again and they ended up together happily
wasn't really anything backhanded or sneaky you could call NTR though

 

[Michika]

"Forcing" even though she took his pants off herself...

You are a threat to society with that mentality, please seek help.

 

[DeadlyShadow0]

Hurry you fool! Save her from the ugly bastard.

It seems we will Add the tag "UGLY BASTARD" and no intercouse